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Yikes.

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I love this. Thank you.

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Beware the dreams we imprison ourselves within...

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Fantastic, though I wondered if the DeSantis women's penitentiary was built on Disney property.

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It’s not, but it’s within short driving distance! :)

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Wow! I sure hope my final statement, even if it's not connected with a crime, is too colorful to be recorded! Great little story, Amy!

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"Thank you for forming my personality and allowing me to experience fear." Loved this line. And the one voice dialogue was a powerful choice. 🔥

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How fun. Congratulations on a wonderful story!

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Brilliant! (Except for the prison name, which injects politics & detracts).

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Thanks! :) I wanted to set it in Florida (I'm from Florida) and this seemed an efficient way to get the setting set. I suspect that after the current Gov runs his moment in the sun, the reference might be too subtle to catch. If he ever decides to re-build his brand around AI or death penalty issues, I might have a problem. :D

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